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Form B. One of the strongest human drives seems to be a desire for
power. Write an essay in which you discuss how a character in a novel or a
drama struggles to free himself or herself from the power of others or seeks to
gain power over others. Be sure to demonstrate in your essay how the author
uses this power struggle to enhance the meaning of the work.
A power
struggle is a common reoccurring event in literature, whether it be a character
trying to escape someone else’s power, gain power for themselves, or both.
Macbeth from Shakespeare’s play Macbeth
is one such character. Macbeth’s struggle to gain power is the main focus of
the play and the event that defines his character.
The first
instance when Macbeth shows his intention for power is when he and his wife
plot to kill the present King of Scotland, King Duncan, so that Macbeth can be
king. They invite the King to their house and Macbeth stabs him to death that
night and frames the servants, who he then also kills to make sure his bloody
acts aren’t found out. Now that he is
King and has gained all the power, one would think that he would stop the
murder acts. However, now that he has power, he is so paranoid about losing it,
that he continues with the murdering.
In order to
maintain his power, he wants to kill everyone who could potentially take his
thrown away from him. The power has gone to his head so much that he orders his
best friend Banquo and Banquo’s son Fleance to be killed. He doesn’t stop
there, he finds out that Macduff, a Scottish noble, is against him, and orders
him and his entire family to be killed. Macduff is gone when the hitmen arrive,
so his entire family is killed. Now, he’s committing cruel acts that don’t have
anything to do with maintaining power. For instance, there was no need to kill
Macduff’s family, but Macbeth goes through with it anyway, to show his power.
This
constant struggle for Macbeth’s power enhances the meaning of the work, because
every time Macbeth commits an act that has to do with guarding his power or
getting more power, we can see the effect it has on him and his wife. The entire
play is based on the how the effects of his greed lead to his downfall. The
cruel acts cause his wife, Lady Macbeth, to go insane and kill herself, and
cause Macbeth to go insane as well and be defeated and beheaded in the end.
Overall,
Macbeth’s struggle for power is what defines his character and leads to his
eventual death. Since this was the main focus of the play, it seems to show
that nothing good can come of greed for power.
Nice job on this Open Prompt! Macbeth was a good choice, it really fits the prompt well. I'm impressed that you were able to go into such detail with character and plot elements. You also had strong points which you backed up with details which fit, and never strayed away from the big idea the prompt was getting at. If you had more time, I would go into a little more detail on how the power struggle affected Macbeth and his wife physically and emotionally, and exactly how it leads to their downfall, but since it's a timed writing thing I wouldn't worry about it. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteGood job! Your response was concise and it provided detailed information that was useful in answering the prompt. The only thing I would change would be to add more about how this enhances the meaning of the work and add some more effects that the cruel acts had on Macbeth and his wife. Something else I was wondering is if Macbeth's murderous acts are what leads to his insanity or has he always been insane? Overall though you did a great job! :)
ReplyDeleteNice job, Tulsi.
ReplyDeleteExcellent job in providing details that support your thesis. You kept to the prompt and did a great job in using specific details. These specific details made your thesis more supported. It is evident that you spent quality time working on this essay. You explained how the power struggle affected his actions, and how his actions affected others. Just an idea, but maybe you could talk more about his personality and character change that occured throughout the play due to his power seeking.
best answer i have read so far.
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